Fuzzy brain fumble through the mist and fog Sun up sun down doesn't matter it's just smog Waiting a whole lifetime and then some For what? To become Not me. Never me. I'm not here Do you hear? Call back later when the air is clear.
This poem got its claws into me, Stephanie! It's sparse, stark and minimal, and expresses a loneliness and disappointment with the human condition. Resonating in my mind still well after reading it. Great stuff!
Deep poem, I am not sure if I got the full meaning. Are you saying that you do not feel like you have found yourself yet or that you are just not present in your life?
It's a little bit of both. I wasn't in a very good mindset as I was going through some things in my life at the time, so this was my therapy. Thank you so much for reading!
Hehe....just like Mary, this reminds me of those moments when I'm hungry. I simply can't focus on anything minus where i can get my next meal and then, I'm back full-force to duty!
Oh Stephanie, such a good poem and there are days i can relate to this!! It's beautifully written, thought provoking and it can mean slightly different things to different people as they go through life!
This poem got its claws into me, Stephanie! It's sparse, stark and minimal, and expresses a loneliness and disappointment with the human condition. Resonating in my mind still well after reading it. Great stuff!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Trish. You totally got what I was going for.
DeleteDeep poem, I am not sure if I got the full meaning. Are you saying that you do not feel like you have found yourself yet or that you are just not present in your life?
ReplyDeleteIt's a little bit of both. I wasn't in a very good mindset as I was going through some things in my life at the time, so this was my therapy. Thank you so much for reading!
DeleteThis sounds like me first thing in the morning. check back later when I can think clearly.
ReplyDeleteLol!
DeleteHehe....just like Mary, this reminds me of those moments when I'm hungry. I simply can't focus on anything minus where i can get my next meal and then, I'm back full-force to duty!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Steph, for sharing.
Oh Stephanie, such a good poem and there are days i can relate to this!! It's beautifully written, thought provoking and it can mean slightly different things to different people as they go through life!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much
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