Monday, June 29, 2020

The Hollow

In the

hollow

of your elbow

I bend
to
your will

In the

hollow

of the valley

I follow
the
wind to the

hollow

of your cheek
and lay
silently so I may catch every

hollow

word
that spills from your lips.


15 comments:

  1. This is so beautifully written. You have so much talent.

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  2. Very nicely written. Precise and deep. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Great poem..! I enjoyed reading it so much.

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  4. Oh my goodness I love this. I actually read it twice. You wrote this so beautifully, thank you for sharing this.

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  5. I love this poem! You are very talented! Keep up the good work!

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  6. You have a talent for poetry! I have never been very good at it. This was beautiful.

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  7. beautiful poem. very delicate and definitely talented.

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  8. Heartbreaking. That last stanza got to me.

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  9. This is so beautiful! Hollow is such a powerful word.

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  10. So touching, you are really talented and good in poetry.

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  11. This is a really nice poem! Glad you shared this with us, thank you!

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  12. OmG it is so deep and heart touching indeed..really loved it..you have really written it so perfectly and amazingly..Thanks for sharing...

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  13. Very beautifully written! Really touching :)

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