Thursday, September 19, 2019

Deepest Dark

In my deepest
dark
You can't see me

look away

This is where I 
hide
just me
and my dreams

toss and turn
through 
the replay

down here
I'm not okay
I promise

In my deepest
dark

You can't hear me
silence
embracing me like an old
friend

grasping at anything to climb out

eventually

As for now,
I'm down in my deepest
dark
hiding
just me and my dreams.




22 comments:

  1. Sometimes, we run for solace in our 'deepest dark' corners but it eventually becomes overwhelming. Ben there and what helped me most is accepting myself and coming out.

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  2. Wow, this is such a beautiful poem and I love it! Wishing to make a beautiful poem like this someday, good job!

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  3. This is soooo beautiful wow!!! Saving it...Thanks a lot for sharing.

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  4. What a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing!

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  5. You are not alone in those moments. But you alone only can make your climb out of the black tunnel. Hold on to the light and rush forward.

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  6. Don't worry, we are here for you.

    Honestly, we all are in the same place only.

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  7. I really enjoyed this poem. To me I interpreted it as you don't want someone to see your thoughts or emotions as you think about things that you don't want anyone to know (or maybe even overthinking [which I do a lot myself]), but at the same time you do want to be able to get out of your head sometimes... even though it's a struggle.

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  8. Very deep and touching writing. You use words skillfully to paint beautiful emotional pictures.

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  9. Loved the poem, your desire to live with your dreams in your own quite solace way.

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  10. Such a beautifully written poem. You are quite talented in writing poems, not many can do that.

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    1. There are a ton of amazing poets out there, but thank you so much!

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  11. Woah, I had to read this a few times just to get all the layers. Thank for being so vulnerable in sharing this!

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  12. Very deep. It's always good to have someone to share your darkest thoughts with, but one has to come out of it on one's own

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  13. This poem was dare I say it "deep". I been here before this was relatable!

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  14. I love this poem. It speaks through the heart and soul. Indeed in poem, one can express their inner thoughts and feelings.

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