Wednesday, November 28, 2018

Lineage

This wall
we've built
has cracks and crevices

scars

hope and
promise
were nearly fatal blows

But, it's made of brick
scarred
as we
built it

don't
crumble

This wall
tells the
story
of
us.


50 comments:

  1. This is so so beautiful, wow! Don't crumble! So good...Thank you so much for sharing.

    Chad
    www.mosaicslab.com

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  2. This is so beautiful, you're very talented! Keep up the beautiful words!

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  3. Such a beautiful poem ♡. Don't crumble! I love this :). Thanks for sharing your goodness!

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  4. so pretty. what a lovely poem for you and your family.

    Joy at www.thejoyousliving.com

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  5. Damn Steph....you nailed what a lineage is all about, in the shortest of ways/forms. Loved it lots!

    A big hi 5 to that.

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  6. Very powerful poem, we all live behind the walls of our own making.

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  7. That's a beautiful poem. "Don't crumble, this wall tells the story of us" beautiful

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  8. i can so relate to that life is a for sure roller coaster

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  9. Loved this. I can so relate to this. Life is seriously full of cracks and crevices indeed.

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  10. What a lovely, heart-felt poem. It's the perfect story of many relationships. The hard times leave scars, but you hang in there for all of the beauty that lies in those imperfections.

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  11. This was quite lovely. Thank you for such a unique And beautiful piece.

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  12. Such a beautiful poem with a picture to match!

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  13. Made of brick and scarred. That is my favorite. As a single mom years ago, that was me. I had to be made of brick, but I felt completely scarred inside. This is lovely thank you.

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  14. Pretty flowers over walls. Worthy of the poem. Take good care of the walls, Love it.

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  15. Such a beautiful poem and that wall is beautiful! Thanks for sharing!

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  16. I'm a huge fan of poetry and it's been a while when I did my last poetry in my blog. This is so heartfelt and deep emotional poem. Great poem.

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  17. such a motivative poem. I love it dear

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  18. I think poetry is such a powerful medium. With just a few words, you were able to provoke an emotional response in me. Beautiful.

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  19. let me tell you, this actually represents me. my wall is still going strong regardless of all of the blows

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  20. So beautiful and ardent. You are the master of imagery. You brought your greatest fan to tears.

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    1. I'm so glad you liked it but I didn't mean to make you cry! Thank you <3

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  21. I love this! Our cracks and tiny crumbles make our walls more beautiful! Such a perfect photo for the poem too

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  22. Oh what a beautiful poem, i thought at first it was describing the wall literally. But i dig deeper, so about relationships. So silly of me. ��

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  23. That’s a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing!

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  24. Wao Steph..
    Great job there dear !!!
    Loved your poem <3
    its so apt! with the picture !!
    Deep indeed <3
    I would love to see more like these.. <3
    Love you !!

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